Analysis of THE GONE PAINS
Yesterday was lame,
That I couldn't smile
In peaceful bla and quack.
My blindness lost away,
That I could see no more,
Dancing in ignorance and cue,
Awaiting the hopeless day,
That never come.
I perk like the bird,
Chirps like the howling hummingbird ,
Just once again and beyond!
But I still lost my dance step,
To negligence and lies.
Trailing a new me!
Is a game I must win,
And finding my new image must be crafted,
Like the clay,
From the dust land.
Once I realize my past,
Was a sham of lies I never bargain,
Until the hallowing wind,
That suddenly swept my hope as lies,
To this day,
I am careful and hopeful,
Regaining strength from above,
Walking through this tunnel of new birth.
Those days of tears are no more,
And days of agony has walked away,
Bringing me into a light of peace and love,
Just once to love again and again,
As I bade goodbye to singing ,
A new song continually,
Yes!....while a whole while it's just never again.
Scheme | XXX ABXAX CCXXD EXXAX XXXD AXFX BAFGX EG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011 11101 010101 110101 111111 10010001 0100101 1101 11101 1101010 1101001 1111111 110001 10011 101111 01011101110 101 1011 111011 1011111010 01011 110011111 111 1110010 0101101 101110111 1111111 0111001101 10101011101 111101001 1111110 01101000 1011111001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 952 |
Words | 215 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 5, 5, 5, 4, 4, 5, 2 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 91 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
The days of agony , pains and sorrows are no more . The poem sing the anthem of a man who's past was Detroit by ugly incidences. A new him just begun.
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