Analysis of Heartfelt Emotions...



I have recently shared many of my words of rhyme here on Poetry.com,
They've told you of my testimony - and some even told you of my Mom.
As you've read - I was abused as a child - and even later as a grown man,
The Lord has helped me to share my story through poetry - in ways that I seldom can.
These poems that I've shared cover the last 61 years God's given me life,
If I told you I had lived on easy street - you know it's not the truth - for I've had my share of strife.
See sometimes in this life - we allow people to hurt us in ways we often refuse to see,
Yet the truth be told - we could've stopped them at any time - for God gave us the key.
I've learned that often times in this life we believe the bad things that hurtful people say,
But as we get older and wiser - we find the truth in God's way.
I've been blessed at times to be what people call rich - and I've slept under bridges - eating out of trash cans to survive,
I've come to appreciate the little things in this life - just thankful to be alive.
You see - money and people come and go - looks fade away - but personality is forever,
It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure these things out - you just need to be more clever.
We will all make our share of mistakes - there's only been one perfect person to date,
Yet he willingly laid down His life as a sacrifice - so that He alone - could change our fate.
It's often said that you have to stand for something - or you'll fall for anything,
There's so much truth in that statement - it should make our minds and hearts sing.
The Lord never said as His followers that our lives would be easy - not even from birth,
He does say in His word that once the race has been run - our new life with Him will show it's own worth.
I was so unsure about sharing what I just recently was told is my personal testimony through poetry,
But the Lord put it on my heart that he could use them to help other people to be able see.
He reassured me that through all the words he has helped me to rhyme,
That he can save other people who are hurting - and give their lives more time.
My only wish is that the words he's given me may help another life not be so painful or hard to take,
All I know is that through my poetry I have found an artistic expression with words of truth - that are never fake.
I pray that the Lord will guide people to the words that he helped me to rhyme,
And that somehow through reading them - He will guide more hurting people like I was - to find Him in time.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJDDAAKKAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110011011111111 11111100011011111 1111101101010101011 011111111011000111101 1101111001111011 111111111011111011111111 10101110110111011100111 10111100111101111101 111101011101011110101 1111100101101011 1111111110110111010101111101 11101001010111101101 11100101011101101001010 110101010011011111111110 111110110111011011011 11100111110101110111101 110111111110111110 11110110111101011 01101111001101111011011 111011110111110111111111 11101011011110011111001001100 101111111111111101011101 101111101111111 111110101110011111 110111011101110101111101111 11111111001111010010111111101 111011110101111111 01111011111101011111101
Characters 2,497
Words 544
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 68
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,906
Words per stanza (avg) 516

About this poem

This poem, like my others, are my testimony of a life that even though it hasn't been an easy one, has been a better one through my faith in Jesus Christ. It's important to remember that if God can bring you to it, God can and will bring you through it.

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Written on December 25, 2023

Submitted by rcatron1963 on February 14, 2024

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