Analysis of My pains and sorrows.



My pains and sorrows.

If I do not dream and I do not sleep, then why do you sit here and weep for me? You'll hold all your dreams in like a cloud holds a lot of rain. But your sorrow and pain I can see you can't hide. Take my hand; so I may understand. I want to set you free. But to be free, you must pay the fee and let go of the pain and sorrows, and then you will see another tomorrow. When a bird flies, a feather floats down softly. Take your pain and sorrows and throw them in the breeze I will be there to catch them for thee and I will lock them up and throw away the key. Then you will be set free, and you won't need me. 
Dedicated to Debbie.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11111011111111110111111110101101111110011111111111110111111111111110101110101001111010011011010111011101001100111111111101111101010111111101111 1000110
Characters 656
Words 143
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 2
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 164
Words per line (avg) 47
Letters per stanza (avg) 247
Words per stanza (avg) 70

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This poem is what it says get rid of all your pains and sorrows and you will see tomorrow.

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Written on March 24, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 24, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on March 24, 2024

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