Analysis of Floaters



While being on a drifting boat
Upon the river wide,
I saw some leaves begin to float
From trees down to my side.

They made me think about a kite
That slowly loses wind
And sways  below its former height
Back to the Earth again.

But then I realized above
Me floating in the sky,
I saw a beautiful brown dove
Upon a breeze so high!

He floated like a nearby cloud,
But firmly in control.
He even kind of looked real proud
As if he's on patrol.


Scheme ABAB CXCX DEDE FGFG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11010101 010101 11110111 111111 11110101 110101 01011101 110101 1111001 110001 11010011 010111 11010111 110001 11011111 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 443
Words 98
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on March 26, 2024

Submitted by stevec.24118 on March 26, 2024

Modified by stevec.24118 on March 26, 2024

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