Analysis of Seven Heavens

Abba Yusif 1997 (Birnin Kudu)



Oh,  my feeble fragile being!
Oh!   God of seven heavens,
Coal-black veil of nights,
Golden-lit yellowish sun
Whose pale skin fades away
As night kisses it by sunset,
God of Adam and Eve:
The cascading waterfall of heirloins

Mouth agape,  bewildered,  struck:
"Subhanallah,  Alhamdulillah!  Oh!  Lord,
Tabarakallah, Masha Allah! "
Were the only wisdom I can vomit
For I have seen what eyes
Have never ever met
Since the creation of earth

Could I say she,  it,  a fiery,
Human,  a gazelle or an angel?
For what I see with my  heart
Is a hybrid of beautiful creations

A moon-lit vision did I see
Glittering in her golden eyes
Whenas star-like sparkles
Were  the adornment of her gums

Her lips were  the innocent
Honey-laddened flowery petals
From which a zephyr
Of musky redolence
Speaks out love and wits
Casting a deadly spell of love
Upon its hearer

*Abba Yusif Birnin Kudu*
 *25th January, 2024*


Scheme XAXXXBXA XXXXCBX DXXA DCEX XEFAXXF BD
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010 1111010 11111 1011001 111101 1110111 111001 00101011 1010101 1111 1110 0010101110 111111 110101 1001011 111110100 100011110 1111111 10101100010 01110111 10000101 11110 00010101 0100100 10110010 11010 1101 11101 10010111 01110 10111 11100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 933
Words 179
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 4, 4, 7, 2
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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It's a poem that reflects the mystery of beauty and nature. It portrays the mystification with a beauty that defies definition or description.

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Written on January 25, 2024

Submitted by abbayusif216 on March 28, 2024

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Abba Yusif

Abba Yusif Birnin Kudu was born on the 17th day of August in 1997 in the suburban Madakanchi Sabuwa area of Birnin Kudu local government Jigawa state in Nigeria. Born and raised in the family of seven, Yusif developed much interest in literature paving way for having the influence of writers such as William Shakespeare on him. Abba Yusif has a vast number of poems written to his credit and a number of novels. "A Seething Cauldron of Dirges" is his most recent novel. He is now in his final year studies at the Sule Lamido University Kafin Hausa Jigawa state. more…

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