Analysis of The castle with the ruby jaded room!



If, you travel, to England, their, sits, a castle!
 With walls, of pure, stone!
Marble, and diamond, were collected, by, its master!
 The story, of how, this, castle, was built, is still told, through bloody, fables and tales!
They say, a long time, ago, a foreign, man and, a man from England, use to get together and sail!
They would, catch, fish, and drink, ale!
 Antiques, run deep, in the family, tree!
I'm speaking, of the picture!
 The Blood, moon, was painted, by this artist!
He loved, his violin!
 It gave, him excitement!
He is friends, with, the skull!
 No bat, does, bite him!
Bloody, was in, his heart, from deaths, that were, tragic!
 Yet, faithful, was his pen!
Life's thoughts, it did capture!
 He had, a friend, who use, to play, with, "the wolves"!
My dear fellow, why lie with a wolf!
 One day, to him, he said!
They are, blood thirsty!
 You, are not, his prey!
Even, his mate!
 One day, my good fellow, it will eat you!
A death tole, you will pay!
 My lad, no worries," I am ok", he replied!
If life, does have it, that day, I will die!
 One day, the next, summer, the artist, fell, in love again!
She was beautiful, with gorgeous, skin, like vanilla!
 When, it came, time, for the two, to be married, the artist, remembered, his friend!
I'll send him, an invitation!
 It will, be good, to see him!
Shortly after, he got, no reply!
 His friend, had got, caught, by the wolf!
Near, the river, as he, passed by!
 They say, late, at night, when, the wind, starts, to blow, you, can still, hear, him screaming!
When, 'The Moon, becomes Blood'!


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011011010 11111 1001000101110 01011110111111101001 1101101010100111011101001 1111011 0111001001 1101010 0111101110 111001 111010 111101 11111 101011111010 110111 111110 11011111101 111011101 111111 11110 11111 1011 1111101111 011111 111101111101 1111111111 11011001010101 1110011011010 1111101111001001011 1111010 1111111 101011101 11111101 10101111 111111011111111110 101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,567
Words 323
Sentences 37
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,107
Words per stanza (avg) 284

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A short poem about a castle with a mysterious room!

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Written on April 01, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on April 01, 2024

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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