Analysis of Waking up in the past

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Waking up in the past

The wind blows a time and fragrance into my space and in my mind I travel the course of my entire life in just moments. Saturated with the emotional presence of every life changing element I went through wakes me up and I have so many new questions.  How dangerous is it to revisit things I've already lived. Is the peace I've established in jeopardy and where do I go from here. Is my mind blown.


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Characters 433
Words 83
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 114
Words per line (avg) 28
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Written on April 04, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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