Analysis of Suffering Praise



The dogs have compassed me,
With the evildoers;
Pierced hands and feet I see,
As wicked pursuers.

I can count all my bones,
They stare and gloat at me;
The pain has caused my moans,
Louder and will not flee.

They divide my garments,
As they cast lots for them;
Acting like some varmints,
For death on the condemn.

Do not be far away,
O Lord to render aid;
To die as a good day,
That the Father has made.

Save my soul from the sword,
My dear life from the dogs;
According to the Word,
To please the demagogues.

Save me from the lion,
Rescue from wild boar;
And take me to Zion,
Resurrection’s the cure.

Copyright © 2024 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CACA XDBD EFEF XGXG HXHX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 01111 10100 110111 110010 111111 110111 011111 100111 101110 111111 10111 111001 111101 111101 111011 101011 111101 111101 010101 11010 111010 10111 011110 101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 650
Words 153
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Why Have You Forsaken Me? Psalm 22:16-21

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Written on April 07, 2024

Submitted by richardnsherrer on April 06, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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