Analysis of She

Everchanging 2006 (Dallas)

Ode


She is my muse
and I hope to you she knows that.
Oh dear please know that.
If she doesn’t know it
than I  will make her know it.
I will tell her that she’s beautiful.
that she is magnificent.
That she is all I’ve ever dreamed of .
That she is the other half of my heart.
That I want to know her inside and out
that I want to know her so well that my finger prints are stamped onto her heart and there is a kiss mark on all 24 of her ribs.
That this poem has no conjunctions because I want to taste every word of her on my tongue.
Oh I want, I want, I want.
I keep wanting because I wish her to eat me whole.
To leave nothing left me but
bones and teeth marks.
I will make her see it.
And if she refuse then I will keep my distance.
I will still love her for as long as time continues.
Just from a distance.


Scheme ABBCCDEFGHIJKLMNCOAO
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1111 01111111 11111 11111 1111011 111011100 1110100 111111011 1110101111 1111100101 111110111110111100101101111101 111011010011111100110111 1111111 1110011101111 1110111 1011 111011 011011111110 1111011111010 11010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 813
Words 187
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 612
Words per stanza (avg) 174

About this poem

I wrote this about a girlfriend I had.

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Written on February 12, 2024

Submitted by 06henderson06 on March 27, 2024

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