Analysis of Expressed Depths Of Love



Expressed kept,
Of love felt.
Deeper than ocean depths.
Yet to adventure or explored.
Can have to feel more meaningful.
To keep unforgotten.
Than wishing it to want,
Love to say to another.
But gone to go ignored.
As if taken for granted.
By someone expecting more love to get.
Although,
Left to believe...
They provide the chips and cheese.
And also the honey that attracts,
One bee.
To hope,
One Queen among all hives to see.
Notices the buzz,
Of a 'wannabe' no different or unique.
Dismissing a blessing,
Kept to keep accepted to cherish...
For what it is that comes,
From no one else to admit...
They had been picked as a gift.
Wished to want delivered and get!

'I was meant for you.
As you were meant for me.
Regardless how deep any ocean may be.
I am the one to come,
To fulfill your every need.
Why do you keep fishing around,
For something better to be found?'

'I have higher expectations.'

'And,
I do too.
Although unlike you,
I know from 'Who' my blessings come.
To be bestowed.
Lowering my nose.
Accepting the sweet smell of your honey!'

'I never heard that before.'

'And I,
Never before...
To anyone ever to have said it!'

'So...
What between us,
Do you expect happens next?'

'A melting of a freeze.
That thaws away your disbelief!
Slow to heat up romantically.'

'Oh my...
Your comments?
Have left to leave me with goosebumps.'

'And...
Your presence has left my spirit to lift,
Higher than my expectations.'

'That I am aware of to clearly see.
Higher.
Than the deepest of oceans!'


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 011 111 101101 11010101 11111100 111 110111 1111010 111101 1110110 110101111 1 1101 1010101 010010101 11 11 11011111 10001 10101100101 010010 111010110 111111 1111101 1111101 11101001 11111 110111 01011101011 110111 10111001 11111001 11010111 1110010 0 111 1011 11111101 1101 10011 0100111110 1101101 01 1001 110101111 1 1011 1101101 010101 1101101 111101000 11 110 1111111 0 1101111011 1011010 1110111101 10 1010110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,502
Words 341
Sentences 46
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 26, 7, 1, 7, 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on April 17, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on April 17, 2024

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