Analysis of An Evening Prayer



Please answer me when I call,
O God of my righteousness;
Give me relief from my fall,
When I had so much distress.

Be gracious to hear my prayer,
How does honor turn to shame;
For the vain words that I share,
Seek after lies I proclaim.

But know the Lord sets apart,
As He hears me when I call;
Because He knows in my heart,
Willing to save when I fall.

I stand in awe and sin not,
Pondering my heart in bed;
Anger brings silence when sought,
Sacrifices that I’m fed.

Sacrifice of righteousness,
Putting my trust in the Lord;
Show some good what God does bless,
Lift the light in one accord.

Lift up the light to Your face,
To put more joy in my heart;
When the grain and wine embrace,
A harvest that fills the cart.

In peace, I lie down to rest,
In safety You make me dwell;
Tomorrow I do my best,
With You, O Lord, I am well.

Copyright © 2024 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAC DEDE FAFA XGXG BHCH IFIF JKJK X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 1111100 1101111 1111101 1101111 1110111 1011111 1101101 1101101 1111111 0111011 1011111 1101011 1001101 1011011 100111 101100 1011001 1111111 1010101 1101111 1111011 1010101 0101101 0111111 0101111 011111 1111111 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 877
Words 207
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Answer Me When I Call Psalm 4

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Written on April 20, 2024

Submitted by richardnsherrer on April 19, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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