Analysis of Love Is Above these Clouds



The world below, a canvas veiled in white,
Love is above these clouds, a soaring flight.
Storms rage unseen, where shadows twist and turn,
Yet here we fly, on wings that brightly burn.

Sunlight ignites the edges, soft and gold,
A whispered promise, never to grow old.
Hand in hand, we dance on windswept streams,
Love's laughter echoes, brighter than our dreams.

Though storms may gather, dark and full of might,
Love is above these clouds, a beacon shining bright.


Scheme AABB CCDD AA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 0101010101 1101110101 110111101 1111111101 101010101 0101010111 10111111 11010101101 1111010111 110111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 467
Words 91
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Written on April 21, 2024

Submitted by ggolden9 on April 21, 2024

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