Analysis of A Distress Cry



I cried to the Lord with my voice,
In pleading for mercy from the Lord;
Supplication that’s not of choice,
Hoping that it is not ignored.

I pour out my quetch before Him,
Telling him about my trouble;
Of how it is making megrim.
Burden buried in the rubble.

My spirit is overwhelmed and faints,
Upon the path where I will walk;
A hidden trap without restraints,
As enemies insult and mock.

I look to the right hand and see,
Nobody cares about my soul;
None of them takes notice of me,
The trap is a very deep hole.

The Lord is my sanctuary,
Shield in the land of the living;
Defense from their military,
Renegades that are defying.

God does attend unto my cry,
Because I am brought very low;
Rescuing from those who defy,
His mighty strength that He can show.

He brought me out of the prison,
That I may give thanks to His name;
Because the righteous has risen,
Dealt bountifully to proclaim.

Copyright © 2024 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD AXXX EFEF EGEG HIHI JKJK X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 010110101 11111 10111101 11111011 10101110 1111101 10100010 11010101 01011111 01010101 11000101 11101101 110111 11111011 01101011 0111100 10011010 0111100 1011010 11011011 01111101 10011101 11011111 11111010 11111111 01010110 11101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 942
Words 208
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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You Are My Refuge Psalm 142

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Submitted by richardnsherrer on April 25, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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