Analysis of Focus

Doreene Felder 1967 (Phila.)



Notice your surroundings
It's quiet inside
Noises out side seem so far away
The beginning  of the morning
Is like a brand new day
The seasons of night time
It is like the dew in the morning
The news on the headline
Is like life without  sunshine
Rain in the garden
Is the fruit of no stardom
Pressures of the world
Makes you seek God
That's for real


Scheme ABCDCEDFFGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 11001 101111101 00101010 110111 010111 111010010 01101 111011 10010 1011110 10101 1111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 362
Words 80
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 278
Words per stanza (avg) 70

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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by doreenefelder192 on April 25, 2024

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