Analysis of come get you memory

Erica Rhian 1982 (Winterpark)



My world, where it was once safe, I felt  protected and truly cared for, from a love so pure, so real..the  kinda love you wait for..
I tried so hard  to make it last as I felt it slipping away
 I held on so tight, that in that moment I  didn’t realize
 That he had already dropped me… when he used to be the one standing behind me.
Now my heart is shattered, all I knew was now a lie, I’m left broken and bruised and yet all I have left is his memory. How is that fair for me? I’m flooded with all these memories that no longer serve me, it hurts and the pain in not subsiding, he left me with my heart still In his hand,
all I want now is to Not have these memories, they no longer belong to
Me, they are not for me,
They are too painful to bear, too raw, I’ve prayed yet they still are with me.. I can’t do it alone, not like this, you are all
Around me and it’s suffocating.. all that I am asking is..
come get your memory..


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Characters 944
Words 198
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 69
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 692
Words per stanza (avg) 196

About this poem

This poem is about heartbreak, and the difficulty of letting go and moving on while your still in love and they have moved on..

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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by Ercrhian on April 26, 2024

Modified by Ercrhian on April 26, 2024

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Erica Rhian

Born and Raised in Fl BA -UCF in Interpersonal Communications 2005 Sole Proprietor more…

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