Analysis of Vines Of A Bauble

Van Dean 2000 (Sheffield)



Obtuse wounds that rub
& poison ivy that climbes
The chambers of my throat
Planted by nails that slice
Running across odds with a faceless dice

Words would shatter upon spoken
To be swallowed again
& lips sown shut by the vines that poison the very life
Vines that blister the tongue of those who speak its name

Its vipers run like veins
Over my naked body, where I'm strung
Still bodies lay present and close, and all around Golgotha

In Golgotha the people lay dead
But they're not-
Their eyes are just closed.


Scheme XAXAA XXXX AXX XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 01111 101011 010111 101111 1001110101 11100110 111001 1111011100101 111001111111 110111 1011010111 1101100101011 0101011 111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 514
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

This is a poem about assault, and how it can be worsened by institutional ignorance.

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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by alfiejf158 on April 25, 2024

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