Analysis of A ‘Sweet’ Confession



To confess is to surrender.
Your words of adoration are swords
Piercing my empty chamber with your confession.
Battling against myself in this war….
I am unarmed against your attacks
So I wander in the oblivion
The tranquility warms me, the silence is comfort, the isolation a refuge
The oblivion is safety
While you are the unknown
The unknown I fear.

Surrendering to an absent enemy is something that I can not bear. So here I am with armour in wait of your offence


Scheme XABXXBXXXX A
Poetic Form
Metre 10111010 11101011 101101011010 100011011 110101101 1110000100 00100110101100010010 00100110 111001 00111 0100111010011011111111111001111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 476
Words 94
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 188
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

It’s a poem about a girl struggling to confess to her loved one. This poem deals with fear, unfamiliarity and loneliness.

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Submitted by Sabreen813 on April 21, 2024

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