Analysis of Treading Water



At first it was just a puddle,
so easy to ignore,
each day I'd feel its splash out the door,
my world becoming muddled.

It became a pond,
a pool of water shallow,
but slowly I began to feel hallow,
hallowed with a bond.

It became a lake,
strong and shimmering
my hopes, not glimmering,
for what this water could take.

Now it is an ocean,
dark and vast,
wind breaking the mast,
fighting its endless motion.


Scheme XAAX BCCB DEED FGGF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11111010 110101 111111101 1101010 10101 0111010 1101011110 10101 10101 10100 111100 1111011 111110 101 11001 1011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 408
Words 94
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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Written on April 24, 2024

Submitted by christapher16 on April 24, 2024

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