Analysis of Treading Water
At first it was just a puddle,
so easy to ignore,
each day I'd feel its splash out the door,
my world becoming muddled.
It became a pond,
a pool of water shallow,
but slowly I began to feel hallow,
hallowed with a bond.
It became a lake,
strong and shimmering
my hopes, not glimmering,
for what this water could take.
Now it is an ocean,
dark and vast,
wind breaking the mast,
fighting its endless motion.
Scheme | XAAX BCCB DEED FGGF |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (75%) |
Metre | 11111010 110101 111111101 1101010 10101 0111010 1101011110 10101 10101 10100 111100 1111011 111110 101 11001 1011010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 408 |
Words | 94 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 78 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
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