Analysis of At The Last Watch
Rabindranath Tagore 1861 (Kolkata) – 1941 (Kolkata)
Pity, in place of love,
That pettiest of gifts,
Is but a sugar-coating over neglect.
Any passerby can make a gift of it
To a street beggar,
Only to forget the moment the first corner is turned.
I had not hoped for anything more that day.
You left during the last watch of night.
I had hoped you would say goodbye,
Just say 'Adieu' before going away,
What you had said another day,
What I shall never hear again.
In their place, just that one word,
Bound by the thin fabric of a little compassion
Would even that have been too much for you to bear?
When I first awoke from sleep
My heart fluttered with fear
Lest the time had been over.
I rushed out of bed.
The distant church clock chimed half past twelve
I sat waiting near the door of my room
Resting my head against it,
Facing the porch through which you would come out.
Even that tiniest of chances
Was snatched away by fate from hapless me;
I fell asleep
Shortly before you left.
Perhaps you cast a sidelong glance
At my reclining body
Like a broken boat left high and dry.
Perhaps you walked away with care
Lest you wake me up.
Awaking with a start I knew at once
That my vigil had been wasted
I realised, what was to go went away in a moment,
What was to stay behind stayed on
For all time.
Silence everywhere
Like that of a birds' nest bereft of birds
On the bough of a songless tree.
With the lifeless light of the waning moon was now blended
The pallor of dawn
Spreading itself over the greyness of my empty life.
I walked towards your bedroom
For no reason.
Outside the door
Burnt a smoky lantern covered with soot,
The porch smelt of the smouldering wick.
Over the abandoned bed the flaps of the rolled-up mosquito-net
Fluttered a little in the breeze.
Seen in the sky outside through the window
Was the morning star,
Witness of all sleepless people
Bereft of hope.
Suddenly I found you had left behind by mistake
Your gold-mounted ivory walking stick.
If there were time, I thought,
You might come back from the station to look for it,
But not because
You had not seen me before going away.
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Poetic Form | Etheree (22%) |
Metre | 100111 1111 11010101001 10100110111 10110 10101010011011 1111110111 111001111 1111111 1101011001 11110101 11110101 0111111 1101101010010 110111111111 1110111 111011 1011110 11111 010111111 1110101111 1011011 1001111111 101100110 1101111101 1101 100111 0111011 1101010 101011101 01110111 11111 11011111 11101110 1111111010010 11110111 111 1010 1110110111 1011011 10101101011110 0111 1001100111101 110111 1110 1101 1010101011 0111011 10001010110110101 10010001 1001111010 10101 10111010 0111 1001111101101 1110100101 110111 111110101111 1101 11111011001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,002 |
Words | 390 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 8, 8, 14, 17, 6 |
Lines Amount | 60 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 270 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 65 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 15, 2023
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