Analysis of The Children



These were our children who died for our lands: they were dear in our sight.
We have only the memory left of their hometreasured sayings and laughter.
The price of our loss shall be paid to our hands, not another's hereafter.
Neither the Alien nor Priest shall decide on it. That is our right.
But who shall return us the children ?
At the hour the Barbarian chose to disclose his pretences,
And raged against Man, they engaged, on the breasts that they bared for us,
The first felon-stroke of the sword he had longtime prepared for us -
Their bodies were all our defence while we wrought our defences.

They bought us anew with their blood, forbearing to blame us,
Those hours which we had not made good when the Judgment o'ercame us.
They believed us and perished for it. Our statecraft, our learning
Delivered them bound to the Pit and alive to the burning
Whither they mirthfully hastened as jostling for honour.
Not since her birth has our Earth seen such worth loosed upon her!

Nor was their agony brief, or once only imposed on them.
The wounded, the war-spent, the sick received no exemption:
Being cured they returned and endured and achieved our redemption,
Hopeless themselves of relief, till Death, marvelling, closed on them.

That flesh we had nursed from the first in all cleanness was given
To corruption unveiled and assailed by the malice of Heaven -
By the heart-shaking jests of Decay where it lolled on the wires
To be blanched or gay-painted by fumes - to be cindered by fires -
To be senselessly tossed and retossed in stale mutilation
From crater to crater. For this we shall take expiation.

But who shall return us our children?


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010101111011010101 11100100111110010 01110111111011010010 10010011111111101 111011010 101000100110111 0101110110111111 011011011110111 110011001111101 111011111111 110111111101011 1011010111011010 010111010011010 101110110011 110111011111010 111100111100111 01001101011010 10110100100110010 1001101111111 111111010110110 1010010011010110 1011011011111010 111111011111110 11110101010 110110111111 1110111010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,636
Words 294
Sentences 17
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 9, 6, 4, 6, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 263
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 03, 2023

1:28 min read
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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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