Analysis of The Fiddling Wood

Stephen Vincent Benet 1898 (Bethlehem) – 1943 (New York City)



Gods, what a black, fierce day! The clouds were iron,
Wrenched to strange, rugged shapes; the red sun winked
Over the rough crest of the hairy wood
In angry scorn; the grey road twisted, kinked,
Like a sick serpent, seeming to environ
The trees with magic. All the wood was still -

Cracked, crannied pines bent like malicious cripples
Before the gusty wind; they seemed to nose,
Nudge, poke each other, cackling with ill mirth -
Enchantment's days were over - sh! - Suppose
That crouching log there, where the white light stipples
Should - break its quiet! WAS THAT CRIMSON - EARTH?

It smirched the ground like a lewd whisper, 'Danger!' -
I hunched my cloak about me - then, appalled,
Turned ice and fire by turns - for - someone stirred
The brown, dry needles sharply! Terror crawled
Along my spine, as forth there stepped - a Stranger!
And all the pines crooned like a drowsy bird!

His stock was black. His great shoe-buckles glistened.
His fur cuffs ended in a sheen of rings.
And underneath his coat a case bulged blackly -
He swept his beaver in a rush of wings!
Then took the fiddle out, and, as I listened,
Tightened and tuned the yellowed strings, hung slackly.

Ping! Pang! The clear notes swooped and curved and darted,
Rising like gulls. Then, with a finger skinny,
He rubbed the bow with rosin, said, 'Your pardon
Signor! - Maestro Nicolo Paganini
They used to call me! Tchk! - The cold grips hard on
A poor musician's fingers!' - His lips parted.

A tortured soul screamed suddenly and loud,
From the brown, quivering case! Then, faster, faster,
Dancing in flame-like whorls, wild, beating, screaming,
The music wailed unutterable disaster;
Heartbroken murmurs from pale lips once proud,
Dead, choking moans from hearts once nobly dreaming.

Till all resolved in anguish - died away
Upon one minor chord, and was resumed
In anguish; fell again to a low cry,
Then rose triumphant where the white fires fumed,
Terrible, marching, trampling, reeling, gay,
Hurling mad, broken legions down to die

Through everlasting hells - The tears were salt
Upon my fingers - Then, I saw, behind
The fury of the player, all the trees
Crouched like violinists, boughs crooked, jerking, blind,
Sweeping mad bows to music without fault,
Grey cheeks to greyer fiddles, withered knees.

Gasping, I fled! - but still that devilish tune
Stunned ears and brain alike - till clouds of dust
Blotted the picture, and the noise grew dim -
Shaking, I reached the town - and turned - in trust -
Wind-smitten, dread, against the sky-line's rim,
Black, dragon branches whipped below a moon!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011101010 1111010111 1001110101 0101011101 101101011 0111010111 1111101010 0101011111 11110100111 11010101 1101110111 1111011101 11011011010 1111011101 1101011111 0111010101 01111111010 0101110101 11111111010 1111000111 001110111 1111000111 11010101110 100101111 11011101010 10111101010 11011101110 1010100010 11111101111 01010101110 0101110001 101100111010 10011111010 01011010 101011111 11011111010 1101010101 0111010101 0101011011 11010101101 1001010101 1011010111 101010101 0111011101 0101010101 110010110101 1011110011 111110101 1011111101 1101011111 1001000111 1011010101 1101010111 1101010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,574
Words 450
Sentences 28
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 54
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 221
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Stephen Vincent Benet

Stephen Vincent Benét was an American author, poet, short story writer, and novelist. more…

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