Analysis of The Telegram

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



'O He's suffering - maybe dying - and I not there to aid,
And smooth his bed and whisper to him! Can I nohow go?
Only the nurse's brief twelve words thus hurriedly conveyed,
As by stealth, to let me know.

'He was the best and brightest! - candour shone upon his brow,
And I shall never meet again a soldier such as he,
And I loved him ere I knew it, and perhaps he's sinking now,
Far, far removed from me!'

- The yachts ride mute at anchor and the fulling moon is fair,
And the giddy folk are strutting up and down the smooth parade,
And in her wild distraction she seems not to be aware
That she lives no more a maid,

But has vowed and wived herself to one who blessed the ground she trod
To and from his scene of ministry, and thought her history known
In its last particular to him - aye, almost as to God,
And believed her quite his own.

So great her absentmindedness she droops as in a swoon,
And a movement of aversion mars her recent spousal grace,
And in silence we two sit here in our waning honeymoon
At this idle watering-place….

What now I see before me is a long lane overhung
With lovelessness, and stretching from the present to the grave.
And I would I were away from this, with friends I knew when young,
Ere a woman held me slave.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EAEA FGFG HIHI JKJK
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111001010011111 0111010111111 10010111110001 1111111 1101010110111 01110101010111 011111110011101 110111 0111110001111 001011101010101 00010101111101 1111101 111010111110111 1011111000101001 01101001111111 0010111 1101111001 001010101010101 001011110101010 11101001 11110111011001 110101010101 011100111111111 1010111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,235
Words 248
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

Thomas Hardy, was not a Scottish Minister, not a Moderator of the General Assembly of the Church of Scotland nor a Professor of Eccesiastical History at Edinburgh University. more…

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