Analysis of Oh, Could We Do With This World of Ours

Thomas Moore 1779 (Dublin) – 1852 (Bromham)



Oh, could we do with this world of ours
As thou dost with thy garden bowers,
Reject the weeds and keep the flowers,
What a heaven on earth we'd make it!
So bright a dwelling should be our own,
So warranted free from sigh or frown,
That angels soon would be coming down,
By the week or month to take it.

Like those gay flies that wing through air,
And in themselves a lustre bear,
A stock of light, still ready there,
Whenver they wish to use it;
So in this world I'd make for thee,
Our hearts should all like fire-flies be,
And the flash of wit or poesy
Break forth whenever we choose it.

While every joy that glads our sphere
Hath still some shadow hovering near,
In this new world of ours, my dear,
Such shadows will all be omitted; --
Unless they're like that graceful one,
Which when thou'rt dancing in the sun,
Still near thee, leaves a charm upon
Each spot where it hath flitted!


Scheme AAABXCCB DDDBEEAB FFFXGGXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111110 111111010 010101010 101011111 1101011101 110011111 110111101 10111111 11111111 00010101 01111101 111111 10111111 1011111011 0011111 11010111 1100111101 11111001 011111011 11111010 01111101 11110001 11110101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 893
Words 172
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 228
Words per stanza (avg) 57
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Moore

Thomas Moore was an Irish poet singer songwriter and entertainer now best remembered for the lyrics of The Minstrel Boy and the The Last Rose of Summer more…

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