Analysis of Darkening Sun



Deifying themselves,
  the scientists disprove
  with their tools
  the existence of God

To sit on a throne
  artificially made
  the Creator to them
  falsely shod

They loudly decry
  as their courtiers boast
  about how powerful
  their laws have become

While built into their structure
  a flaw starts to crack
  their self-glory
  —a darkening sun

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2019)


Scheme XXXA XXXA XXBX XXXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 101 010001 111 001011 11101 01001 001011 101 11001 111001 011100 11101 1101110 01111 1110 01001 01001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 375
Words 58
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 14, 2019

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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