Analysis of Elevation

Charles Baudelaire 1821 (Paris) – 1867 (Paris)



Above the ponds, beyond the valleys,
The woods, the mountains, the clouds, the seas,
Farther than the sun, the distant breeze,
The spheres that wilt to infinity

My spirit, you move with agility
And, like a good swimmer who swoons in the wave
You groove the depths immensity gave,
The inexpressible and male ecstasy.

>From this miasma of waste,
You will be purified in superior air
And drink a pure and divine liqueur,
A clear fire to replace the limpid space

Behind this boredom and fatigue, this vast chagrin
Whose weight moves the mists of existence,
Happy is he who vigorously fans the senses
Toward serene and luminous fields—wincing!

The one whose thoughts are like skylarks taken wing
Across the heavens mornings in full flight
—Who hovers over life, understanding without effort
The language of flowers and mute things.

Translated by William A. Sigler

Submitted by Ryan McGuire


Scheme AAAB BCCB XXDX XXXE EXXX D X
Poetic Form
Metre 010101010 010100101 101010101 011110100 1101110100 01011011001 110111 0101100 1101011 11110001001 010100101 011011011 011100011101 111011010 1011110001010 01010100110 0111111101 0101010011 1101010100110 010110011 0101100100 01011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 875
Words 150
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Charles Baudelaire

Charles Pierre Baudelaire was a French poet who also produced notable work as an essayist, art critic, and pioneering translator of Edgar Allan Poe. more…

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