Analysis of One Perfect Summer's Day



One perfect summer's day I walked o'er field and
   country lane.
The sights and sounds of nature in her glory filled me
   fain.
Strolling through these environs would lighten any load,
So on I went, till presently I found a winding road.

It led up to a grassy knoll, which seemed to beckon me,
And then a gentle breeze did blow, as if to say, "Come,
   see!"
I trod along the rising path with easy, measured stride,
And soon upon the crown I stood, to view the other side.

The vista there revealed to me was wonderful indeed,
With rolling hills, a glistening stream, and fields of
   flowering seed.
There on the slope before me, a maiden I did find;
Her beauty was beyond compare in all of womankind!

An angel without wings was she, with hair as black as
   night;
Her eyes, the colour of the skies in cool, clear morning
   light.
She turned and looked — my heart stood still! One word
   escaped from me:
"Beautiful!" was all I said, barely audibly.

She smiled and walked toward me; with graceful gait she
   flowed.
And then she spoke in dulcet tones, this strange,
   romantic ode:
"I am the woman of your dreams; I knew you'd climb
   this hill.
But you've not truly found me yet; perhaps you never
   will!"

I reached out then to touch her, but woke up with a
   start!
The room was dark and silent; I only heard my heart!
I thought that I could see her, standing in the gloom.
She wasn't there, but still, I swear, I smelt her sweet
   perfume!

Copyright © Robert Haigh 1995


Scheme ABCBDD CXCEE FXFXA XGXGXCC CDXDXHXH XIIJXJ X
Poetic Form
Metre 101101111010 101 0101110001011 1 1011010110101 11111100110101 11110101111101 0101011111111 1 11010101110101 01010111110101 01010111110001 110101001011 1001 1101011010111 010101010111 1100111111111 1 010110101110 1 1101111111 0111 100111110100 110101111011 1 0111010111 0101 110101111111 11 1111011101110 1 111111011110 1 0111010110111 111111010001 110111111101 01 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,513
Words 279
Sentences 19
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 7, 8, 6, 1
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 10, 2020

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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