Analysis of That Human About Us



The lack of humanity
drives zero-sum
Away from each other
a darkening sun

What science explains
its methods conceal
Frustration attacks
lost cogs on the wheel

Desperation in charge
its point ever sharp
To pierce into nothing
but leaving its mark

That human about us
 left bare unatoned
Quantifying our passion
—stripped clean to the bone

(St. David’s Pennsylvania: January, 2021)


Scheme AXXB XCXC XXXX XABX A
Poetic Form
Metre 0110100 1101 011110 01001 11001 11001 01001 11101 01001 11101 110110 11011 110011 111 1001010 11101 110010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 367
Words 61
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by sage48 on January 13, 2021

Modified by sage48 on January 13, 2021

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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