Analysis of No atheists in a foxhole

ED GIARDINA 1949 (NYC)



NO ATHEISTS IN A FOXHOLE  
When the artillery is bellowing all around you !
The bodies in a line !
The helpless fear surrounds you !
You feel your out of your mind .
Then prayers come from nowhere !
You ask not to die !
You'll find a sudden peace in the din of silence !
You will not wonder why !
For you know that in the morning , you have survived the night .
No atheist in a foxhole , can live through this bloody fight .
When they count the bodies , and declare who's right or wrong ; the last standing will sing a victory song .
No atheist in a foxhole can ever truly pretend .
Something out there saved him .
Life can live again .
So , when your world is troubled , and you need a friend ; remember that foxhole , and how your knees would bend .
In your desperate timeless moments , know that you will survive .
Kiss the ground you walk on .
You are still alive !
If the day sky is blackened darker than coal , be brave , as no atheist in a foxhole .


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Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1100001 10010011001011 010001 0101011 1111111 11111 11111 110101001110 111101 11110010110101 11000011111101 111010001111101101101001 11000011101001 101111 11101 11111100110101011011111 01101010111101 101111 11101 101111010111111100001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 937
Words 172
Sentences 19
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 721
Words per stanza (avg) 202
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Submitted on January 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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