Analysis of Loners



Here we go back to the story of life of a kid

He was special, life’s like an auction couldn’t even place a bid

Most of the time he felt hollow, empty, sad and alone

He didn’t have friends to warm up his home

He listened in class he didn’t get a break

As for people who cared, HA! Never get that clean slate

When he tries to be nice, warm up to someone

He is betrayed, hurt, and poof, he was done

Anger and sorrow when u just want a hug

Confess to the person u trust most makes u feel small as a bug

Everyone around u is warm and happy like a bear in their dens

Cold air and darkness are my only friends

I hear bang bang bang from the barrel of a gun

I scream “I shoot next” at the top of my lungs

I️ fire and fire into the sun

Bang bang, drop drop, everything falls one by one

There are three people, u can always count on

Me, myself and I️ everyone else just gone

Listen to this closely, sharp as a dart

No friends equals Loneliness, new hole in your heart


Scheme A A X X X X B B C C X X B X B B X X D D
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101011101 111011110110101 11011110101001 111111111 1100111101 1110111101111 1111111111 1101101111 10010111101 0110101111111101 1001111010101011 1101011101 111111010101 11111101111 1100100101 1111101111 1111011111 110110111 1011101101 111010011011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 954
Words 199
Sentences 2
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by ShadoweD on February 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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