Analysis of Loners
Here we go back to the story of life of a kid
He was special, life’s like an auction couldn’t even place a bid
Most of the time he felt hollow, empty, sad and alone
He didn’t have friends to warm up his home
He listened in class he didn’t get a break
As for people who cared, HA! Never get that clean slate
When he tries to be nice, warm up to someone
He is betrayed, hurt, and poof, he was done
Anger and sorrow when u just want a hug
Confess to the person u trust most makes u feel small as a bug
Everyone around u is warm and happy like a bear in their dens
Cold air and darkness are my only friends
I hear bang bang bang from the barrel of a gun
I scream “I shoot next” at the top of my lungs
I️ fire and fire into the sun
Bang bang, drop drop, everything falls one by one
There are three people, u can always count on
Me, myself and I️ everyone else just gone
Listen to this closely, sharp as a dart
No friends equals Loneliness, new hole in your heart
Scheme | A A X X X X B B C C X X B X B B X X D D |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111101011101 111011110110101 11011110101001 111111111 1100111101 1110111101111 1111111111 1101101111 10010111101 0110101111111101 1001111010101011 1101011101 111111010101 11111101111 1100100101 1111101111 1111011111 110110111 1011101101 111010011011 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 954 |
Words | 199 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 20 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 37 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 10 |
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