Analysis of 100504



100504-a girl is born w/ tulips and songs
Red,red,roses dance and doll--
Temple bells call and call
all the preachers,worshippers young,old,bold
to let know the Arrival of this doll
100504-she`s now 21
Bold,beateous,beautiful
She says every sin has its song
Every song its gaul
Rainbow cuts the sky of summery shawl w/ the
shawl of sadness blooming in my hall
She doesn`t love me;Yet I fall
Everytime she rejects me I toss the rills of
rejections with my moghul
100504-arti`s is 21;I hope someday she`ll
come to apprehend the pain,the desperation
the loneliness that she me on poured
Making me devoid of all senses,sights
consolations;Go ye 21 burn more Troy
Neglecting me so long


Scheme ABCDBEBFCGCCHBBIDAJF
Poetic Form
Metre 01111001001 1101 101101 1011 1110010111 11 1 111001111 100111 11011111000 111010011 111111 10101111011 010111 111111 110101010 010011111 10101111 11111 010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 661
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 548
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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