Analysis of A Better Hope



This world sounds gloomy,
And all these worldly pleasures makes me tired!
The one I thought really great has now become trivial!
There is no real value, everything has a price!

These birds are happy though,
They have to search their food everyday!
The thought of everything is replaced,
By the feeling of nothing!

I trusted you with all my heart,
Though you never bothered to trust me!
When I gave you all the powers,
You never thought I deserve any recognition!

I could have helped many, consciously
And might have harmed few unknowingly!
Those whom I helped never remembered the same!
Those who were hurt never forgotten the same!

This life is a maze, hard to solve the riddle!
Love and affection is only in theory, a nice one to read!
The possibility of goodness drained for now!
It is just the hope that keeps me going!

A Poem by Ayubkhan.U


Scheme AXBX XXXC XAXD AAEE BXXC D
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 01110101110 01111011101100 11111010101 111101 111111101 0111011 1010110 11011111 111010111 11111010 110110110010 111110100 011110100 11111001001 11011001001 11101111010 1001011001001111 00100110111 1110111110 01011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 824
Words 153
Sentences 16
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by ayub_k on August 06, 2016

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Ayubkhan U

Hi this is Ayubkhan.U from Chennai-India. I am a Poet and Advertising Copywriter based at Chennai. I have written more than one hundred poems and posted the same in my various blogs. I am also a Softskill trainer specialized in Communication skill. I have written many Reviews, Short Stories and Children Stories and published in my various blogs. more…

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