Analysis of An Old Photo



That still fresh old photograph of you
astride a spotted pony, bare feet
dangling as limply as your torn dress:
the background was a high veranda,
cool green trimmed with gingerbread.

A small boy sat the animal with you --
two solemn and handsome children
upon a well-fed pony, photographed
by an itinerant in the thirties --
the time frozen as long as the picture
or fading memories of it may last.

The boy, our brother,
did little in his forty years;
but now, we see his boy's eyes,
soft, liquid, serious, sad,
no hint of smile about them.
We weep his loss.

And you, sister:
alert, protective, girl's face
set to fend off the world.
Cast so early in your role
as glue holding us together.


Scheme AXXXX AXXXBX BXXXXX BXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011 01010111 100111111 01101010 111110 0111010011 11001010 01011110 1101000010 0110111010 1101001111 011010 11001101 1111111 1101001 1111011 1111 0110 0101011 111101 1110011 11101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 669
Words 127
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 6, 5
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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L. Larry Amadore

A word lover who enjoys beautiful poetry of all genres and responds with admiration to fresh and felicitous phrases. [Retired manufacturing/production control mgr./marketing manager/financial analyst. USAF veteran; lived in US, Mexico, Germany, Turkey.] more…

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