Analysis of As Time Goes On



Lost and Confused
for life and for love
Emotions so mixed
Depressions my friend
Sleeps the cousin of death
thats as close as I will get.

My life will be long
Full of Accomplishments and Dissapointments
Dreams being made, love being lost
Trouble to be made, Bails to be posted
Planes to fly, Countries to protect
Love to be found, And kept forever.

Fun times to last
Fun times that pass
Times of relief
Relaxing by a pool
Times of pain...Loosing me.


Scheme XXXXXX XAXXXX XAXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 11011 01011 01011 101011 1111111 11111 11010001 11011101 1011111110 11110101 111101010 1111 1111 1101 010101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 432
Words 83
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on October 22, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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