Analysis of bad day



today seemed like just another day
untill the sun came out
and shined my way
then in a flash it was fillied with dismay
the kind that i couldnt wish away
we had made plans all week long
to go down the mountain and see my mom
but the car broke down
 its was the very frist thing
that started out to ruin my day
then I got sick as one could be
and kept on thinking how could this happen to me
but whats to be is to be
I just wish once things would work out for me
but that seems like something ill never see


Scheme ABAAACDEFAGGGGG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 011110101 10111 0111 1001111101 01111101 1111111 1110100111 10111 1101011 110111011 11111111 011101111011 1011111 1111111111 1111101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 491
Words 108
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 397
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Submitted on September 02, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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