Analysis of Fool animal



We are surely fool animal
 If can't sense the downfall
 Even insects and birds sense the danger
 Why should we commit something in anger?

We can't resort to remedial ways
 Addiction  is all the way driving you away
 From real life to that of artificial thinking
 In fact you are pushed to and face sinking

Consumption of alcohol can be legal
 Some of its consequences may be illegal
 Anything taken in excess is bad
 It increases frustration and makes you sad

Inner consciousness is real reflection
 That shall never allow you to go for bad action
 But since you are made slave of desires
 Nothing good shall be accepted by you to admire

It is wrong to assume who will be the winner
 The chances of coming out of it becomes thinner
 It may certainly break you from within
 it will cause you tremendous pain

It is time pass for pleasure
 Certain things are allowed for sure
 If you can control your desires
 Nothing may go wrong or put on fire

Keep it to self and master the art
 You are the person to have good start
 Be not at its mercy and succumb
 It may otherwise make you to jump

The day may end with tragic death
 People may lament death and lay the wreath
 For few days you may be remembered
 Rest all may be the days to be forgotten for ever


Scheme AXBB XXCC AADD EEFX BBXX BXFB GGXX XXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11101100 11101 101011010 1110110010 1101101001 010110110101 11111101010 0111110110 0101101110 11110011010 10100111 10100100111 1010011010 1110011111110 1111111010 1011101011101 111101111010 0101101110110 1110011101 11110101 1111110 10110111 111011010 1011111110 111101001 110101111 111110001 11101111 01111101 1010110101 111111010 11110111010110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,235
Words 236
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on May 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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