Analysis of His Last Hanukkah

Neil McLeod 1947 (Oxford)



His Last Hanukkah
Sam Lippman, a patient for 25 years, died after falling backwards on the first night at age eighty nine.

Permit me please to raise a glass to Sam
He was, in life, an ornery fellow,
One thing that I'm sure was in his plan
He wasn't going to let age make him mellow.

Teeth to the task he never would surrender,
It would take an act of God to stop him driving.
You can leave your canes a'standing in the hallway
Contempt for ailments that's what kept him thriving.

And should a passing thankful-beggar greet him,
In glowing terms for some kind act he'd done,
He'd wave it off and say that it was nothing;
Helping was his way of having fun.

And if there was a product or a service
The price of which was making you dig deeper,
You should take leaf from Sam's good book,
Trust me! he would always get it cheaper.

He was like the lamp that kept on burning,
With optimism meeting come what may.
Doggedly determined he would leave his cane behind
And that's what got him on the final day.

So let me take my turn with each of you
From where I have been waiting on the bench,
I ask you just to stand and toast his memory
“The man we loved - he was a real mensch.”


Scheme XX XAXA BCDC XECE XBXB CDXD XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11100 110010111101010101111101 0111110111 1101110010 111111011 110101111110 11011101010 111111111110 11111010001 01110111110 01010101011 0101111111 11110111110 101111101 01110101010 01111101110 11111111 111111110 1110111110 110010111 1000101111101 0111110101 1111111111 1111110101 111111011100 011111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,150
Words 231
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by NeilMcLeod on October 10, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:11 min read
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Neil McLeod

Born in Oxford, raised in Kenya, past winner of Los Slamgeles Poetry Slam and author of abitingchance.blogspot.comand "The First Thanksgiving".Doctor McLeod is a performing poet who has recited at Highland Games, dinners and Burns Nights for the last 36 years. He is happily married, lives and works in Los Angeles,has three children, and practices as a dentist on Sunset Boulevard:http://www.drneilmcleod.com/He can be contacted by e-mail at drneilmcleod@yahoo.com and will willingly entertain requests to share his work with permission. more…

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