Analysis of In the Mid Sky..



In the Mid sky ………….
North Carolina  Kill devil hills – Known to the world since long
You being the  first witness of ,
                                           the wonderfull  flying song ….
 Flying high for the first time  - over the mountain & river side,
was the the  dream of two brothers - they wanted to simply glide ….
 They had been asking  the flying creatures - Ohh how do you really fly ?
 We will also fly one day- alike you  in the sky…
The repeated  effort continued – the zeal kept them high,
They both  dreamt of their own  dreams  –  only and only to fly….
That morning had a wish -  they tried on there own,
The courage , dedication that they had- all along  was  shown..

Crisscrossed were the fingers -of the few present then,
Heart beats became faster – counting begun from 10…
And  Yessss….. they succeeded - nor one, two but  Thrice .. –
The utter dismay  prevailed –with  the  exciting surprise…

Yup  Orville and Wilber, you did everything so right !
And indeed you won finally  - the long awaited fight … !!

Today  standing beyond the  three structures-  on the memorable ground ,
Taking a ride to touch and see -  feeling  the feel all around….
Looking at the sky so high,-and  the  floating clouds there ,
Oh Brothers …!! take a bow ,.. what a milestone  was achieved here….


Scheme ABXBCCAAAADD XXXX EE FFXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0011 10101101110111 11001101 01101 101101110010101 100111101101101 11110010101111101 1110111011001 00101001001111 11111111001011 11010111111 01001011110111 10010101101 11011010011 01101011111 01001011001001 110010111011 00111100010101 01100101101010001 100111011001101 1010111001011 1101011011011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,324
Words 227
Sentences 14
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 12, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 232
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on August 27, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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