Analysis of Life Vest
Life Vest
By: ForeverSwt727
When life brings you down,
please don't forget to be a clown
and laugh if off without a frown
to dream away when you sleep in that gown.
Be the best when you wear a life vest
Because life is a pass or fail test
and I want to see you less
if you prefer to give me a mess
Thank you Jersey Joy for giving me hope
you clean the dirt in my life with your magic soap
and cheer me up with your constant phone calls
and you seem to pick me up during my waterfalls
How do I repay someone like you
when you care about me and stay true
even though you are scared of me
yet I feel the way you want to be
I love the light you bring
and you make me dance and sing
to the music in my head
as you always let me smile before I go to bed
Be the best when you wear a life vest
Because life is a pass or fail test
and I want to see you less
if you prefer to give me a mess
We will make it out without a pout
as long as you dont shout
and we give it our best shot
since you say I am so hot
I am just waiting for you, my superman
to save this goddess before she ran
and now she wants you more than you think
Please help me swim this sea before I sink
Since you are a delicious fish that bites
and I am just a panda who wants to fly kites
because my limits are as high as the sky
as I am your angel, no lie <3 style="font-weight: bold;">
Stay sweet and we will meet.
If you are true, I will work with you. ;)
Another SWEET song inspiration: Michael Buble~everything } "http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eNM8VBeecYU"
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11 11 11111 11011101 01110101 1101111011 101111011 011101111 0111111 110111101 1110111011 110101111101 0111111011 011111110110 11101111 111011011 10111111 111011111 110111 0111101 1010011 111111011111 101111011 011101111 0111111 110111101 111110101 111111 01111011 1111111 11110111100 111100111 011111111 1111110111 1110010111 011101011111 01110111101 111110111111 110111 111111111 010110101011011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,501 |
Words | 326 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 41 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 97 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Submitted on March 22, 2010
Modified on April 19, 2023
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