Analysis of Long Afternoon



Snow washed the sun in worn
White cotton and
Covered up the music in my head.
The weak book on the table sat
Wanted like
A scared man's whiskey
Strong in its musty smell,
Beckoning.
A stained light
Pinched through
The window
Danced in my curved hand
And still I couldn't
Sing the word
To catch time
Browned and
Dancing all around me.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOBF
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 1100 101010011 01110101 101 01110 101101 100 011 11 010 10111 01110 101 111 10 101011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 317
Words 63
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 265
Words per stanza (avg) 63
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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