Analysis of Lower



Lower than the crap on my shoes .
Have no more in life to loose !
This time you win so let it drop and
leave me be is all I ask >
for now I need to forget what is my pass !
Lower is a term I know, in life thing you can
never let go !
Time wont help s what can be done, you say>
Lower your standards and go your way .
Lower than a bridge you see, I'm the truck that
can't cross on a dead line must get there you
see !
My choice is go and damage the truck or loss
all what choice you know, straight ahead I run
down that lonely road !
Lower and Lower I fall, in the end still my final
call .
In the end you win but find a way start over again !


Scheme ABCDEFGHHIJKLMNOPQ
Poetic Form
Metre 10101111 1110111 111111110 1111111 11111011111 101011101111 1011 1111111111 101100111 10101111011 1110111111 1 11110100111 1111110111 11101 10010110011110 1 00111110111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 625
Words 140
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 476
Words per stanza (avg) 149
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Submitted on May 27, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Coy Day

I am a disabled vet,visit the eldely in commity to insure their need are meet.love to read,love physolgy favority tv NCIS,1000 ways to did,NCIS LA CARTOONS nick name ( cj hillybilly)grauite of the international libary of potery(laureate certificate) july 2005. bs in buisnees, Diploma(Phlicolgy/social work) more…

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