Analysis of Manifested



That bottle of liquor putting you to the test
Your inner demons starting to manifest

Your no longer in control your bodies running a muck
Straight evil in your veins not giving a f#ck

That guardian angel gets muted out
Your demons have it in a choke hold unable to shout

It struggles and fights ,shouting out ,trying to scream
But your mind is all warped like a nightmarish dream

This is your manifestation your truly to blame
Let them have there fun as they cascade you in shame

They will dance and play, fill you up with desires
They will beat on your spirit till it's weakened and tires

Demons in a bottle and you swallowed them whole
You've drowned out all reasoning now there in control


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 110110101101 1101010110 11100011101001 110011110011 1100101101 11011001101011 110011011011 11111110101 111001011011 111111101101 111011111010 11111101110010 100010011011 111110011001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 678
Words 128
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on February 14, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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C Castro

I'm def don't consider myself a poet I started writing after my sister passed away...Just to try and express myself with out having to throw my misery or sadness on anyone else.... At times my poems are dark but that's just how I felt at the moment more…

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