Analysis of Mom and Dad



Miss you Mom,
Miss you dad,
I know I shouldn't cry,
And you wouldn't want me sad,
I came here to see you,
I came here to talk,
Now instead of a house,
Through these stones I walk,
Mom and Dad the wind,
Blows right through,
The core is lost,
Without the both of you,
Now left to fill empty shoes,
With everything you taught,
I will cheerish and use,
While upon my hand,
I place this kiss,
 Rest it against a stone,
Without you both,,,all I have is this..........BAD-Mc..<3


Scheme ABCBDEFEGDHDIJKLMNO
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 111101 0110111 111111 11111 101101 11111 10101 111 0111 010111 1111101 11011 11101 10111 1111 110101 011111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 453
Words 93
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 344
Words per stanza (avg) 90
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Submitted on December 24, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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