Analysis of My Big Sister



Most everybody has one
I had none
An older sibling to guide me
and be by myside
but t'was not to be.

To myself, I kept my thoughts
As slowing along, I struggled
learning to be independent
with no one to confide
my angst and growing-up pains.

Entering med school in my teens
losing childhood friends along the way
was more than I could bear
With classmates much older than I
lost in a grown-up world was I
How I wished things were different.

Along came an angel who put me
through the straight and narrow
and shot me like an arrow
hitting the target where I am today
She's the big sister I now have.


Scheme AABCB XCCCX XXXDDC BEECX
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 111 11010111 0111 111111 111111 11001110 1011010 111101 1101011 10011011 10110101 111111 1111011 10011111 11110100 011110111 101010 0111110 1001011101 10110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 578
Words 116
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on September 03, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alexander Lim

I am a neurologist, who writes mostly medical articles for publication. When I have time, I tend to write essays and forums, sometimes for our local newspaper in areas that interest me, some of which may be quite controversial. I love "point" and "counterpoint", having been a co-captain of my Hi-school debate team. Poetry is not my genre of choice. I do it when some subjects prompts me, but I do find solitude in it. more…

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