Analysis of My Dearest

Mahipat Singh 1973 (Uttarakhand)



My dream is to find you, when I was born,
My dearest you never saw me before,
My heart is waiting for you now,
You will come for sure,

I promise where and when,
God will meet us together
Then we will enjoy the life's glory,
But you never do anything in hurry,

My dream is like a burning fire,
Still waiting for a way,
Grow a path full of joy,
Spirit petals of rose on your way,

Days have passed away, time to reach,
When warm summer comes on my way,
Burning day showering rain blesses on me,
Thou, the greatest heaven come to meet us,

Power and prosperity to separate alone,
There is no bound on it,
That you and me hold it,
But our inner voice quit away,

Few days more when time will spent,
Basket of happiness will meet us,
All happiness will be in our bags,
Fame And Beauty will surround us,

Beautiful world access the way,
Promise to me guide the way!
But until when I surf, the new
Till than you look the way,

Love beyond the life,
Innocent doesn't know  it
My soul believe that, once its true,
You accompany me and wings will spread alone!

By : Mahipat Singh
                       dt. 04.07.2004  time 11.30


Scheme XXXX XABB ACXC XCBD EFFC XDXD CCGC XFGE XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 1101101101 11110111 11111 110101 1111010 111010110 1110110010 111101010 110101 101111 101011111 11101111 11101111 10110011011 1010101111 100010011001 111111 110111 110101101 1111111 101100111 1100110101 10101011 1001101 1011101 10111101 111101 10101 1001011 11011111 101001011101 111 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,107
Words 214
Sentences 7
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Mahipat Singh

Leo Mahipat Singh Jetha was born in 10th August, 1973 in Kandai, Janapad Chamoli, Uttarakhand, India and he completed his schooling and Intermediate from there. Presently he is living in Faridabad. He is dual PG from Pondicherry University in Master of Foreign Trade (MFT), MBA (International Business), graduated from M.D. University in Arts (BA). He loves to Literature and wrote many Short Stories and Poems in English and Hindi languages. more…

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