Analysis of Need Some Help

James Johnson 1952 (Algoma, WV)



Need Some Help

I need some help.
Can you help me please?
Ha! Ha! Ha!
If I was Jesus Christ or Allah
would you then help me please?
So when you decide to
kick a dog,
kill a cat,
spit in the face of a Vet
or bomb innocent people yet....
Remember maybe you and God
need a serious chit chat
before someone kicks you
and your friends too,
plus spit in your faces,
bomb your places
to eliminate all the devil's faces.
Then you may ask for Help!


Scheme A ABXXBCXDEEXDCCFFFA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1111 11111 111 111101110 111111 11111 101 101 1001101 11100101 01010101 1010011 01111 0111 110110 1110 1010101010 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 420
Words 89
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 18
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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James Johnson

I'm an everyday man who enjoys life as God wishes. It is portrayed through my love of poetry. I'm here because God wants me to be for His purpose only. Most of my work is done within minutes after thoughts and visions. I hope you can interpret and enjoy the benefits of my poetic guidance and input. more…

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