Analysis of Neelam 71 INCH



NEELAM 71 INCH
Neelam screams; yet she seems
leaping in the lap of happiness, dreams
NLM 71 INCH
Rainbow brushes Heaven's teeth
Borrowing the colors off Helen's hip
Knife cuts deep, deep, deep
the pond of pleasure with pleasure-pumping
prince; empowering my tarantula to try out our
Nymph-so soft, so sweet, so solemn, so swift
Her lips of virginity render me meek, unique
NLM, NLM, 71 INCH
In you I leap; in you I scream
I get melted, I get mixed with your love liquid
glittering in your moonlit love-stream
NLM, NLM; please, please, please
do me out, do me in; do me do, do; do me do
war in Iraq,Twin-Towers, tears; Smart's missin
Julie Given Glance shark's fear
Come my fairies, come my fair


Scheme ABBACDEFGHIAJKJLMNOP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11 11111 1000111001 11 110101 1000101101 11111 0111011010 101001010011110 1111111011 0110100101101 111 01110111 111011111110 10001111 11111 1111101111111 10110111 1010111 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 675
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 537
Words per stanza (avg) 125
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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