Analysis of Never perfection



Never perfection, no clarity of thought
A life filled with promise and after thought
No natural ability to make things work
Failing dreams turn to apathy you jerk

You see creation and talent in others
Try to emulate your sisters n brothers
But a part of your black arrogance
Has chide the inner envy of no chance

No way forward or a backward glance
For life's expectations, battles advance.
As a weak-willed puppy does not ween
Nor a doubting soul goes nowhere unseen.

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Scheme AABB CCXD DDEE X
Poetic Form
Metre 10010110011 0111100101 110001001111 1011110011 11010010010 1110110110 101111100 1101010111 111010101 110101001 101110111 101011101 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 467
Words 86
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 08, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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