Analysis of News Of Old



...and so...
I'm news of old, used paper tissue
such feeble truce inherently was prone to issue,
to meet and greet was great despite adventure
who dares to ask the Sea to change it's nature?

I separate my being from all that's outside
and slice the negative away, without remorse or pride
may her sporadic love secure another anchor
may my old past
retain the smell of good, at last

those miles driven and without a point
and promises of greatest action
I will not call her coward, traitor or a snake
the pact was based on honor
miscalculation on my part, mistake...

forgive my sins and I - indemnify
the sweetness of the thoughts
of sparks inside her eyes
good byes are due...
good bye

my nevermore beloved friend


Scheme XAABB CCBDD XXEBE FXXAF X
Poetic Form
Metre 01 11111101 1101010011110 11011101010 11110111110 11011011111 01010001010111 1001010101010 1111 01011111 111000101 010011010 111101010101 0111110 0101011101 011101010 010101 110101 1111 11 110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 704
Words 133
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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