Analysis of Nice day



I had no protection
walking through the fields
the sun burning on me
desolation every where I looked

I was on my way
to the nearby woods
knowing there was a creek
where I took a swim, nude

I floated in the water
the sun shining on my face
after a while I got sleepy
and laid myself to rest

The noise of animals
suddenly woke me up
sunset had fallen
it was time to go

Quickly I went homewards
mother cooked my favourite meal
it made me lick my fingers
and now it's time to sleep


Scheme ABCX XXXX XXCX XXAX BXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 111010 10101 011011 010100111 11111 10111 101101 111011 1100010 0110111 10011110 01111 011100 100111 1110 11111 10111 101111 1111110 011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 458
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by Jet-Rood on July 30, 2014

Modified on March 16, 2023

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Jet Rood

2023: In a world full of chaos, creativity is one of the helping things to keep yourself sane. ******************************** 2014: A good head and a good heart are always a formidable combination. But when you add to that a literate tongue or pen than you have something very special. - Nelson Mandela - ******************************** I am from the land of tulips and mills. Writing is a need like eating and sleeping. I think we are all wondrous creatures who deserve to love ourselves and live in freedom. I like to participate in cases which can make a difference for myself, my surroundings and the earth. My wish: humanity in a non-dualistic society. more…

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