Analysis of Peace Serene...



I went inside a forest of hope,
I saw all of my fears,
rivers flowing next to me,
 filled with yesterdays tears.

From moments found alone,
 on the ground crying out to our Lord,
please my God guide me through this worldly discord.

Such is the unbalance that none can see,
when in the mind fighting to be free.

Each one of us has a place,
its there,
 that it doesnt matter your race.

For Jesus came for everyone,
now relax,
 enjoy & let His love be fun.

The same are your roots;
that of a tree,
buried in the dirt for none to see.

A hidden stream,
 underground, filling a well,
where many drink from,
hearing you yell.

How much longer shall my future live in the past,
how much longer will this pain last?

Within our mind we take ourselves there,
to a place where we think others dont care.

A battle within thought,
because we were worldly taught.

Seek the unseen,
find peace serene...


Scheme XXAX XBB AA CDC EXE XAA XFXF GG DD HH II
Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 110101011 111111 1010111 11101 110101 1011011101 11111111010 1100101111 100110111 1111101 11 1111011 1101110 101 0111111 01111 1101 100011111 0101 101001 11011 1011 111011101001 11101111 01101110011 1011111011 010011 0110101 1001 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 855
Words 167
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on July 10, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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